The Official Writing Challenge
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10/14/07
So moving and tender - you have a wonderful grasp of language. This is poetry in prose. Lovely.
10/14/07
This is very beautifully written! I smiled when you mentioned the "imaginary brake". My daughter just got her license and I use that brake too. :) I know this story has happened many times over and for this little girl I'm glad that this life is not all there is to our existence. Very well done!