The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the way you put names to the shepherds and personalities. It made a story we all know well come alive....kind of like a Max Lucado writing!
10/15/07
This is awesome writing and great work! But pooey, you swtiched POV's when you switched from the POV of the shephards to the POV of the Angels.

But, even with the POV shift you've got some gooood writing here! ;)
10/15/07
I like how you took a familiar story and presented it in this way. Really enjoyed this! Good work!
10/16/07
Lovely characterization and detail. I enjoyed this very much . This is an EXCELLENT first entry. Keep writing.
This is a very good read. Good descritpion of the angel. Thank you for sharing this.
10/17/07
Your story was so interesting. Your characters are well developed and the dialogue very fresh. You did a wonderful job with this entry!