The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/07
Love to hear this perspective from a shy person. It reminds me to encourage those who are timid, but at the same time, not to judge people who aren't singing gregariously....we all show our love for the Lord differently. Good job.
Like the instruments in an orchestra the Holy Spirit actually "directs" each one as HE wills when we are willing...
I enjoyed the "heart" of this piece. The message is excellent. I would work a little on spelling, grammar, punctuation (watch the run-on sentences), but your style is engaging, and you made a valuable point. Blessings!