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10/11/07
This is extremely creative. The middle layer of your "piece" was rich with meaning for us all. We all wonder sometimes if we're missing something, then we go back to our cake. I'll be munching on the crumbs of this one for days.
Seeing with our real eyes the wyes of who we truly are-spirit-like our Father is always precious...
We can see things as they truly are when we set our hearts fully to SEEK to KNOW only HIM...

keep seeking, my friend
10/17/07
Interesting and unique story. I've had vivid dreams, too, that stuck with me and made me long for that missing "something" I could not quite put my finger on. Your description of the girls abandoned way of worship is beautiful.
10/18/07
A very interesting dream, with a very beautiful lesson. Didnít the narrator think of eating all the cake as duty, so where has the rest of it come from?