The Official Writing Challenge
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Love your little story! Paragraphs would make it easier to read :) Cute tale of a family on the way to worship. Corporate begins with family..
10/17/07
Weaving the song titles into the message was an excellent way to paint the scene. Take time to double check all of your spelling, spacing and read your entry outloud to hear how it sounds to your reader. I love the title. I love the way that you set the scene and I love the sweet simple message of this piece. I believe that you have a bright future with your writing :>