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Very nice story. I liked how Marge was able to find peace in her garden and through observing nature.

There are a few grammar issues in here, but they can be easily fixed. You have some very nice details and descriptions. Good writing.

Blessings.
09/26/07
Your plant and vegetation descriptions are good...you have a thorough knowledge of your subject, so I'm assuming you are a plant lover. :) I like your spider illustration! It reminds me of the verse about spiders even being king's palaces (or something like that). Nice writing!
10/01/07
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