The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. It held my attention and built suspense.

Often we leave out details because we are over the word limit. You have plenty of words left so I would like to have known more of what the MC was struggling with, how writing this letter would lead to peace and calm in the MC's life.

Nice illustrations. I wanted to help pick up those loose papers! :-)
Nicely written. I loved your opening paragraph and the vivid images.

I want more. Let us know what happened, what she seeks forgiveness for. Your writing is excellent. Don't be afraid to give more of it.