The Official Writing Challenge
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You share some very valuable words of wisdom here. Thank you for them.

I chuckled at your reference to Elvis and your "don't laugh" comment. Oh--I wasn't laughing that you liked Elvis, but that you said, "don't laugh." Actually, that personal part was my favorite. I would suggest adding more personal things to your essay. It will help the reader connect with you and relate to your message.

Nice writing. Keep it up.
I really like your "calm waters" and "still waters run deep". There are some wonderful thoughts in just your title alone.

As a music lover, I'm sure I've heard the Elvis version you mention. (and I'm not laughing :)

I want to remember your title. Thanks for writing this.