The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm not a poet but I enjoyed this sweet poem. I'm not sure if I followed it completely, but I did get an overall sense of calmness and depending on God. I loved the images of the couple who stuck together and always turned to God. Nice job. Keep writing. Blessings.
09/26/07
Wow! Is this a true story? You have some good rhyming pairs (thick and thin/reached trash bin and feeling/reeling).


This couplet struck a chord with me, "Your troubles be it big or small. They’ll fall like the Jericho wall." I really like it.