The Official Writing Challenge
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09/20/07
Whoa! Great writing!! A couple very minor grammar/punctuation errors were the only thing I could see in this otherwise stellar beginner entry. The calmness reflects spiritual growth and is a nice ending. (ps My brother was a b-ball star, too. :) ) Cat
09/27/07
I really enjoyed your writing on this subject. I've had children is various sports over the years too. It sounds like your boys have done better in the long run. It was nice to read of your conquering this desire to tell them off.

How are the fine arts received at that school?