The Official Writing Challenge
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09/23/07
Those early days with a baby are so difficult, and you've captured exactly what they are like.

It's best to use few or no exclamation points in expositaory writing, and there are a few other punctuation issues here.

Despite the punctuation problems, you have a very appealing voice, and I enjoyed reading this.