The Official Writing Challenge
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09/23/07
The imagery in the first two stanzas is quite nice, as is the title. The whole mood is tranquil, serene.
10/01/07
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Our Savior's embrace is like no other. "Come on up and sit with me a spell child." You seem to invite him at the same time He invites you. Compelling picture.