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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Calm (emotionally) (09/13/07)

TITLE: Coif de la Calm
By Ann Renae Hair
09/16/07


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Coif de la Calm


Feel a bit weary,
And ready for rest?
Well, come right on in,
Be my honored guest.

You need some relief?
You feel like a mess?
This is a great way
To conquer your stress.

You say it’s a day
From “you can guess where”?
Sit down and relax.
I’ll work on your hair.

For this is the place
Where it all begins
Sit here in my chair
That lifts up and spins.

Gathered together
Here are two or more.
Let’s talk it over
With Jesus our Lord.

Tell all your burdens.
Share all your troubles.
Just lay your head back.
It’s time to make bubbles.

A pump of shampoo,
Some warm water spray.
A little massage -
Let go of your day.

A few minutes here
Make all things look new.
Life will seem brighter.
You’ll love your new “do”.

Here’s some hot water
Poured into a mug.
It’s time for some tea.
Oh, you need a hug!

We cry and we giggle,
Act just like a girl,
Solve the world’s problems,
While we cut and curl.

So when you’re at wits end,
Just read in the Psalms…
Then call your hairdresser.
You soon will be calm.


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Joanne Sher 09/20/07
Cute and FUN! I love the singsong of this - it fits your personality, and how I feel in your chair ;)
Laura Gibson09/21/07
i loved this. when reading it, i felt the calm waters and soothing hair wash as i read down the poem, congrats on a well written piece, loved it.
Marty Wellington 09/23/07
Very nice. Loved the use of pampering can give us relief and be calming. Cute.
Jan Ackerson 09/24/07
This is an utter delight, from the first word to the last.
dub W09/24/07
Cute and fun. I need a poem in the puppy pen, come on in and join us.
Dee Yoder 09/25/07
A poet, too! I enjoyed reading this poem: it made me smile. Great job tackling a new genre. I'm going to my hairdresser tomorrow, as a matter of fact. It's true that it's a little bit of Heaven for me while I'm there! You described it all very well.
Sheri Gordon09/26/07
This is really cute. I totally look forward to going to the hairdresser, for all the reasons your poem says. It is such a relaxing time. Good job.