The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your style of writing. Thanks for sharing.
Your words and thoughts are very soothing (calming) indeed. There is a lot of quiet emotions going on here and I think you have the talent to expand this even further.
For reading ease, break up some of the pargraphs and thoughts. Carry your reader thought your eyes and heart.
The imagery here is wonderful and I could see it all. Well done.
09/21/07
Well done. I'd love to see this expanded. You're descriptions are very engrossing... Like Loren said, though, try breaking up the paragraphs more. It'll help things flow better. All in all, very stirring.
This is a beautiful meditation, and the perfect length. Sometimes it only takes a few words to truly speak.