The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/07
You have some amazing descriptions in here- so vivid! What an excellent lesson too. A few parts felt "out of place" to me somehow, but this was a very strong piece nonetheless. Keep writing!
09/23/07
Great descriptive writing. Interesting storyline...so she is 60s teacher; no wonder your MCs daughter thought her cool - welcome to the puppy pen.