The Official Writing Challenge
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09/22/07
Excellent reminder. I'd love to see this expanded.
Thank you for giving me something to think about. Well done. :)
I love the simplicity and strength of this piece. You did a great job of thinking outside of the box and choosing to write about something tender, loving, and calm versus something tragic and sad. Great work!
09/25/07
Very good short devotional. The illustration of your son and his dad was very effective. Nice job.
09/26/07
Well done! I loved this line:
There is something to be gleaned from watching a sleeping child in the arms of his parent.

This was very well illustrated. Great writing!