The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
A sweet little word-picture!

Be careful of confusing it's with its, and I always recommend choosing a title that hasn't been used before.

Any story that features a tiny baby's fingers always has the awww factor that appeals to readers--good job.
09/14/07
I love your last line most of all, great truths shared in this article.