The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Cute story!

There was a section in the middle when you went to present tense, although most of the story was in past tense. A few minor punctuation errors, easily fixed.

The image of your big policeman hubby on the ground--twice--is amusing and fun.
09/14/07
Very cute & humourous!
You have a real knack for telling a humurous story. Congratulations on your placement!
09/21/07
Congratulations Nancy. In addition to your highly commended placing in level one, you also placed 11th overall. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards