The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/07
I really, really like your writing style--it almost reminds one of an earlier era.

I was confused by a few details--namely, was it a man or a boy whose birthday was being celebrated? And how did the dusty Bible figure in?

Perhaps a second read will make it clearer...your writing is certainly pleasant to read.