The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/07
Cute story, written in a fun, wry voice. It was perhaps a little bit predictable--is there any way to re-work this so that your readers are as surprised as you were?

Nice writing skills are evident in this little gem.
I enjoyed reading this story. I believe more detail on the emotion of the labor and delivery might have helped to build up to the surprise. It brought back some wonderful memories for me and reminded me that the Lord really knows what He is doing even when we don't!