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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Desire (01/17/05)

TITLE: FREEDOM
By Vasyl Dmytriv
01/21/05


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FREEDOM

I HAD A THOUGH THAT LIFE IS LONG RUN …
BUT TIME SHOWS THAT IT IS SHORT DISTANCE
I HAD AN ILLUSION TO SITUATE A PLACE FOR FREEDOM
BUT IN REALITY IT WAS JUST MY OWN DESIRE

I WAS BELIEVING - THAT THE FREEDOM IS ALL FOR ALL
IN THE WAY - THAT IT IS SPOKEN ABOUT
BUT I FOUND THAT ITS SENCE IS DIFFERENT...
DEPENDING ON DESIRES AND REASONS

NOW I HAVE DECIDED TO BELIEVE IN GOD
HIS FREEDOM – IS CONCRETE – WITHOUT ANY THEORIES TO EXPLAIN
HIS AUTHORITY – IS JUST – WITHOUT ANY HYPOTHESIS AND REASONS
HIS KINGDOM – IS BASED ON TRUTH AND LOVE

YES, WE ARE HUMAN IN NATURE, AND CONSTANTLY LOOKING FOR PERFECTION
OUR LIFE AND DREAMS ARE PART OF DESIRE TO HAVE A PERFECT FREEDOM
TO ENJOY A SHORT LIFE OF PHYSICAL EXPERIENCE
IN THIS TEMPORARY STAGE OUR VISUAL EXISTENCE

AS FOR ME, I WILL TURN MY FAITH IN GOD
TO UNDERSTAND HIS WORDS AND UNCHANGEABLE PROMISES
BECAUSE, MY BODY – WAS CREATED TO WORSHIP HIM
MY SOUL – TO UNDERSTAND HIS MIND
AND MY SPIRIT – IS BORN TO SEE ALMIGHTY!

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Sally Hanan01/27/05
There is much truth in this. A few spelling mistakes and could have done with a few more words between words to make the lines less jumpy.