The Official Writing Challenge
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09/13/07
Great story! Very exciting.
09/13/07
Wow, an intriguing story. I loved it. Well written. Another one for the puppy pen collections.
09/14/07
Very good, and I also enjoyed having a glimpse into another culture.
09/18/07
Cool story. The title drew me in to read this. I could feel the frustration and anxiety of waiting. Love the ending.
09/19/07
You have some wonderful descriptions here. I was definitely engaged from beginning to end!
Great writing! We plan our days, but God directs our steps and leads others to know Him. Wonderful, engaging story that was simply life-like in its telling.
09/19/07
Wow! I love this story. Your conversations were so realistic that I felt I was watching this whole story unfold. Love the title, too. This is one that I'll remember for a while.
This is such a meaty story and so very well written. I was mesmerized the whole way through.