The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/07
Sweet little fable!

Was it one bean, or beans? You've got it both ways. And you might have had one sentence too many--your story gave us the lesson, so you don't have to summarize for your readers what you've already taught them. Trust your writing to do its job. This is quite cute.
Friendship is a real treasure to be cherished. The younger we learn this, the better. I enjoyed your story.