The Official Writing Challenge
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What a nice testimony!

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My favorite of God's names is Jehovah-Jirah: God provides!
It's so fun to read a story that I can connect with. We had a similar situation with our home...not exactly what we had pictured, but close enough, and exactly what God had planned for us! Thanks for sharing.