The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/07
One of my favorite Bible stories!

I wonder if you could make your re-telling fresher by injecting some new element--telling from a new POV, perhaps.

Thanks for reminding us of God's surprises!
To think of a twinkle in God's eye over me is precious. I really like that point in your story.