The Official Writing Challenge
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09/15/07
God is so creative in the ways He speaks to us. Thank you for sharing!
Laury
09/16/07
Sweet essay, told with a real and personable voice.

It's a good idea to avoid exclamation points, except in dialogue. Since your title had the word "surprise", the mark isn't really necessary.

You are so blessed to have two wonderful teens.
Sounds like a proud mother has written this. God has his hand on our children.
09/19/07
Very nicely written - quite conversational in tone and much to ponder!
This struck me as a very personal glilmpse into a journal entry. It reveals the heart of a loving, caring person. It is very well presented in this context.
09/19/07
Your mother's heart for her children, your faith in a Loving God, and the appreciation you hold for all of His blessings, and surprises, in your life shine through in this entry. You are indeed a blessed writer!
09/19/07
Neat devotional, especially for mothers, with awesome reminders. Your son's birthdate is pretty cool, but I bet you love your daughter's birthdate more now. Really nice writing!
09/21/07
"Eye has not seen, ear has not heard; neither has it entered into the heart of man what the Lord has prepared for them that love Him."
We aint seen nothin' yet!
Rejoicing with you, Brenda.
09/26/07
Your comment on my "calm" article lead me to this one of yours that has blessed me. Your witness has blessed God. Great sharing.