The Official Writing Challenge
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This was good and fit the topic well.

I felt it needed to be expanded, and would have kept with the story of Esther only, without the added commentary. Make the story our own! How would she have felt? What were her surroundings? Give us the details, and make it your own story and you've got a winner!

Keep writing!
Esther is a great example in boldness. Tell us more. I like how you compared us to Esther, great thought.