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Very clever indeed...the lukewarm coffee line. A clear reflection of our often "put down others to build yourself up" society. Kudos!
How sad that the experiences of life have worn this man down. You describe him well, though few would befriend him as he is. Very descriptive writing.
I also like the "lukewarm coffee" line. This causes us to remember what God says about lukewarm Christians>

"I know thou works, that thou art neither cold nor hot; I would that thou wert cold or hot". Revelation 3 v15 KJV. "So then because thou art lukewarm, and neither cold nor hot , I will spue the out of my mouth". Revelation 3 v16 KKJV

Clarence "Sonny" White