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Very clever indeed...the lukewarm coffee line. A clear reflection of our often "put down others to build yourself up" society. Kudos!
09/07/07
How sad that the experiences of life have worn this man down. You describe him well, though few would befriend him as he is. Very descriptive writing.
I also like the "lukewarm coffee" line. This causes us to remember what God says about lukewarm Christians>

"I know thou works, that thou art neither cold nor hot; I would that thou wert cold or hot". Revelation 3 v15 KJV. "So then because thou art lukewarm, and neither cold nor hot , I will spue the out of my mouth". Revelation 3 v16 KKJV

Clarence "Sonny" White