The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
I like the medieval atmosphere here.

The names didn't seem quite right for Germania and France, but I could be mistaken. They're certainly in line with the fable-like tone of the story.

Followers of this genre should really love this piece.

09/09/07
I liked this historically based story. We would like to think that history records events correctly and that the real heroes get credit. Is this based on a true story or perhaps on period writings? Nice work!