The Official Writing Challenge
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09/06/07
What a good lesson for us. I like that concept: whatever we get thrown into is where life really is. Good job.
I would like to read more about Henry and Thana. Is there a roamnce for them on the horizon? One thing you might try is double spacing between the conversational lines. It makes for easier reading. I see a run on sentence or two as well. All in all, this is nice. Loved the ending.