The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
Much to like here - I love the line about the blood shed on the mount. An excellent message for sure.
Wonderful message! You might want to put your poem into poetic line form such as:
Lord make me bold as I can be,/
when sharing the Gospel to the world./
That people would see their lost condition,/
before in the fire they are hurled.
Thank you for entering the challenge!
09/12/07
Hi; I liked the message of your entry. If I counted right, you had 10 lines. I think by breaking them in half, the poem might benefit. Keep writing