The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/07
I can feel your passion in this piece. A little more attention to grammar and punctuation would truly make this piece shine. I enjoyed this.
It's a very interesting story. More attention to punctuation and grammar would make it even more so.
tnx for the comment. I really appreciate it. :)
There's a ton of passion and emotion in this piece, and you choose the words very well. It's good to see a story that covers more than just one angle of Mother Teresa's doubt; I thin we're gonna need more of those soon.

Make sure to keep everything in the narrative in one tense, in this case the past tense. Her thoughts can be in the present tense, however. You fix that and you're really ready to move with this story.

Great job!
09/12/07
Really nice work; I'll look forward to reading more of your pieces.