The Official Writing Challenge
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I am delighted for your answered prayers, in handing over your fears and for your Grand-daughters recovery. I you weren't writing about something so emotional, you may wish to use some pronouns instead of her name each time, and there are a few words to tighten up on re-reading. Thanks for telling your story.
09/03/07
Thank you for sharing this. So glad there was a happy ending!