The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. What a powerful reminder to parents! Truly.
I did get a little confused in there about who lost a child - was it the narrator earlier on? - until I got to the end. But maybe that was just me not reading correctly. It really packed a punch though.
Excellent descriptive writing
Good sentiment although the transition in the beginning to another little child was confusing. I have to assume that "Chad" is the baby's father.
I did some editing - submitted this to Chicken Soup.