The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/05
Wow. What a powerful reminder to parents! Truly.
I did get a little confused in there about who lost a child - was it the narrator earlier on? - until I got to the end. But maybe that was just me not reading correctly. It really packed a punch though.
05/14/05
Excellent descriptive writing
05/18/05
Good sentiment although the transition in the beginning to another little child was confusing. I have to assume that "Chad" is the baby's father.
08/08/05
I did some editing - submitted this to Chicken Soup.
http://www.faithwriters.com/article-details.php?id=31124