The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
This is a great story. Love the way you used 1st person. I could feel the sense of urgency.

Way to go.

09/07/07
Congratulations, Coleene. Your entry has placed 7th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.