The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
Awesome analogy of being locked up without the freedom of Christ.
08/31/07
This is very cool. Your desriptions are excellent.

Awesome job.
09/03/07
Wow! I am amazed at how you sucked me and then made me feel like I'd been hugged! Great writing style--thanks for sharing this! Be Blessed!
09/03/07
Very well written. I could picture your story so easily. Your comparison of finding your way out of a dark room and finding God is perfect.
09/03/07
If only everyone were aware that the dark rooms they walk in through life ARE dark, maybe they would not wait to bring the Light of Christ into their lives. Great analogy and writing! Your descriptions are vivid.
09/04/07
This is astounding. I am speechless. This is going in my favorites for sure!
This was good on so many levels! Well done!
09/06/07
Congratulations, Jenny! First place-great writing!
09/07/07
Congratulations on your 1st place. Your writing is very good. I am severly claustrophobic, and your descriptions literally had me shaking. Great job.