The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
The idea of rescuers seeming to be gangsters is incredible. I am certain that this would be amongst the most terrifying things that could happen. Well done. The only trouble I had with this piece was the slang used, as I did not know a lot of it. But that is probably just my problem.

09/03/07
What a touching story. I felt the fear--Great writing.
09/07/07
Congratulations, Stephen. Your entry has placed 14th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.