The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
This has some great thoughts about fear.

You may want to think of a shorter title. Something more eye catching. Pique my interest.

This is a great start. Good job.
09/03/07
Very insightful. Ease up on the heaviness and make this a little lighter to read and it will be a seller for sure! I like the way you conveyed your ideas. I would also contmeplate a shorter title. Overall good writing. Keep up the good work.