The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really good; I like the use of alliteration; In view of the first two lines, you could have continued in couplets,leaving the last line to stand alone for effect. Well done.
09/03/07
I really liked this and it confirms something which happened to me this morning, At exactly 6:10 this morning while at work I had the urge to prayer for a person who is terminally dying of cancer. I am hoping to hear good news this afternoon about her condition. It's so stange when prayers are needed and you pray even when you have no idea what's going on--you just pray. Great piece here. Keep up the great writing.
Ah! A portrait of an intercessor at work! :) tnx for sharing!
I can relate to this encounter and am awed by God's mysterious ways of prompting people to prayer. Good work, I could see the scene play out in my head.
09/15/07
So is this one - awesome! Please keep up the GREAT work!