The Official Writing Challenge
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08/31/07
This is a very interesting take on Scripture. I like how you think.

It was a bit disjointed in places, but I know that's how you intended it to be for effect, but I had to look over things a couple of times to get it. (Could just be me.)

Great work. Hope to see more.
09/03/07
I too was a bit confused, but I like the way it moves. Very articulate with the wording. Well done!
09/07/07
Congratulations, Carolyn. Your entry has placed 10th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.
This story psinted pictures in my head, and the fearwas palpable. Well written. :)