The Official Writing Challenge
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Anyone who thinks to rhyme "lexis" and "nexus" is a hero in my book!
Great flow to this - keep writing!
This is a lovely poem. It flows nicely and has a message that's right on for the topic.
The poem flows nicely and excellent message.
I love poetry! You've done beautiful work on this. Some of your rhyming words are wonderful and you have some perceptive thoughts. (I didn't realize Lexis was anything but a car...I'm going to have to research that. :) Good writing.
Wonderful rhythm and a great message in this poem. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem of receiving clarity from God, but the last couplet is my absolute favorite.
I love the rythm of this poem and it's message is beautiful! Keep Writing!
Very nice.

"That special instance my heart is receptive,
Your truth revealed, no longer deceptive."

Wonderful flow. Great word choices! Great writing!
Great message.
This had a nice flow to it. Thanks for sharing.
Very nice! Flowed very well and I liked the ryhme, my only note is I think it is correct as "man's" instead of "mans" right? Otherwise, great job! ^_^