The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
Anyone who thinks to rhyme "lexis" and "nexus" is a hero in my book!
08/25/07
Great flow to this - keep writing!
08/26/07
This is a lovely poem. It flows nicely and has a message that's right on for the topic.
The poem flows nicely and excellent message.
08/28/07
I love poetry! You've done beautiful work on this. Some of your rhyming words are wonderful and you have some perceptive thoughts. (I didn't realize Lexis was anything but a car...I'm going to have to research that. :) Good writing.
08/29/07
Wonderful rhythm and a great message in this poem. Well done.
I enjoyed your poem of receiving clarity from God, but the last couplet is my absolute favorite.
I love the rythm of this poem and it's message is beautiful! Keep Writing!
Very nice.

"That special instance my heart is receptive,
Your truth revealed, no longer deceptive."

AMEN!
08/29/07
Wonderful flow. Great word choices! Great writing!
Great message.
This had a nice flow to it. Thanks for sharing.
08/29/07
Very nice! Flowed very well and I liked the ryhme, my only note is I think it is correct as "man's" instead of "mans" right? Otherwise, great job! ^_^