The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
Hmmm, I think I get it...is the uniform a metaphor for Pawel's spiritual life?

There was a lot to like here, especially the character of Pawel, a complex and interesting guy. Any confusion is on my part, I'm sure.
08/25/07
Excellent description, especially. A very intriguing read.
08/27/07
Your entry definitely made me think. I smiled at your first sentence here, "“Still have some hair,” he chuckles. His short-cropped hair is a concession to nature; his two-day beard is his answer back. He looks deep into the eyes that peer back at him, the eyes that have watched him his entire life." I like these thoughts. This is a well-written entry.