The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful and true thoughts here.

Devotionals like this can be taken to the next level by eliminating some of the "Christian-ese" (those phrases that we've read so many times) and adding personal anecdotes, and fresh ways of stating timeless truths.

You're a very good writer--feel free to branch out into less "safe" territory!
You speak with auhority - this comes across VERY well. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.
You were clever in starting your entry sounding very confused...then you showed the remedy to the confusion. Your last paragraph logically follows AND you were wrong about being confused. :)

I like this line too, "Read the scriptures. Put on your armor so you may be protected from the fiery arrows." Excellent reminder! Thanks!
Good thoughts - true words. Maybe try using words other than "confused" to convey your meaning.
I enjoyed your piece and there is so much truth. This will make an excellent devotional.
A few typo/spelling errors, but otherwise, a good message that needs to be heard. This could make a good devotional. Excellent job. ^_^