The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
Wonderful and true thoughts here.

Devotionals like this can be taken to the next level by eliminating some of the "Christian-ese" (those phrases that we've read so many times) and adding personal anecdotes, and fresh ways of stating timeless truths.

You're a very good writer--feel free to branch out into less "safe" territory!
08/25/07
You speak with auhority - this comes across VERY well. Thanks for sharing these thoughts.
08/27/07
You were clever in starting your entry sounding very confused...then you showed the remedy to the confusion. Your last paragraph logically follows AND you were wrong about being confused. :)

I like this line too, "Read the scriptures. Put on your armor so you may be protected from the fiery arrows." Excellent reminder! Thanks!
08/29/07
Good thoughts - true words. Maybe try using words other than "confused" to convey your meaning.
I enjoyed your piece and there is so much truth. This will make an excellent devotional.
08/29/07
A few typo/spelling errors, but otherwise, a good message that needs to be heard. This could make a good devotional. Excellent job. ^_^