The Official Writing Challenge
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08/24/07
I love the dialogue between mother and child here.

I did wonder about a just-turned-six child being asked to write a story. She'd presumably just have finished kindergarten; seems like an advanced assignment for one so young.

Very sweet and tender story.
08/24/07
Yeah, this is a winner in my book. Very well done dialogue. An enjoyable read. Welcome to the puppy pen.
08/25/07
Captivating story and descriptions.
08/25/07
A lovely and comforting end to a sweet story about childlike faith. This is charming and heartwarming. Good job!
08/26/07
This is a special story.
08/26/07
This is lovely and sweet. Made me smile.
The dialogue is quite good and enjoyable
08/27/07
The voices of June and Alice are perfect, and Alice's voice is quite endearing! She sounds just like a 6 year old should sound. I like your writing style very much. This is good!