The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/07
Very nicely done:) Yes - your story was not confusing at all!:) Couple of suggestions I learned - drop the 'just' and 'basically' - you will have a cleaner sentence. Also you might want to try your ending without the last two lines...a thought only. Nice devotional writing.
08/23/07
Nice writer's voice, a good piece.
08/24/07
Good lesson, and fairly well written, work on your citation style and you have a winner. Thanks for posting.
08/31/07
Congratulations, Brett. Your entry has placed 13th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall is available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.