The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/07
Very, very good! I had an inkling what was up about halfway through--you did this just beautifully. Tops in this level.
I, on the other hand, didn't know where it was going - I was caught up in his description of his life which was nicely weaved into his confused search for a room. This was well put together - and for me, an interesting surprise at the end. Good job!
08/24/07
Wow! Well done. It has me thinking in circles, yet how sad?
Good take on confusion. Very readable.
08/25/07
Very nice and a realistic depiction of a confused man. I liked the way that you wove his thoughts about his wife into his search for the room. Good job!
08/31/07
Congratulations, Hanna. In addition to your second place placing in level one, your entry also placed 19th overall. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall are available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.