The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/07
Interesting! I'd love to read more about your two weeks in Mongolia.

I wondered if this could be stronger on topic, which only came in at the very end. Maybe some cultural or language confusion?

Congrats for being able to spend many hours in an airport constructively!
Interesting. Sounds like fun.
08/24/07
Well, I just read your husband's companion piece about your trip! I thought I recognized the circumstances in your story. It's interesting to hear this story from two sides.
08/24/07
Enjoy your conversational style. You have some great advice from Jan, so I won't repeat it. Enjoyed this, and keep writing!
I love stories like this! And sadly, I dream of getting a day ahead somewhere in the world, just to feel cool. :-P This is very well-written.

One thing: when you use hyphens to separate an idea, make sure to use two so that your readers don't end up with new words like "tourism-museum." You don't want them to be....confused. ;-)

Good luck! Don't forget to throw a brick on the message boards on Wednesday!