The Official Writing Challenge
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08/13/07
Nice build up; and, I imagine your story concludes as the story of so long ago: Joseph lets go of his anger; and, in so doing, shows favor to those who in the carnality of things, may not have been deserving.
08/16/07
A nice twist on the old Bible account of Joseph. It puts it into perspective to think of this same event taking place in our modern world.
08/17/07
Congratulations, Ebony. Your entry has placed 6th in Level 1. With so many entries in this level, you've really done well. The Lists for the Top 15 in each Level and the Top 40 overall are available in the Weekly Results and Highest Rankings forum of our Faithwriters Message Boards.
Good work, Ebony. This is a well-written piece and I enjoyed the read.