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08/13/07
Your story somewhat resembles mine own: The parts about losing both parents in a short-time span of one another; the part about living in close proximity of your mother; the death of your mother taking the worst toll on your emotions; and, most assuredly, the part about the impromptu visits made by 'Anger'. For three years now, I have been visited by anger: During the first two, I would often allow him a momentary visit; but, then he wanted to come too often. I had to stop answering the door; and, perhaps speak to him from the window or not at all. I know now that I really just wanted to understand him; and, you have shed some insight into the reason why--I must learn to stand on my own. Indeed, Jesus is always with me. Thanks for the message. Good luck to you in your writing and in your life.
08/16/07
Peg, congratulations on placing 4th in your level and receiving a Highly Commended! Your first try out and you did so well! If you sign on to FaithWriters Message Boards, the Writing Challenge, you will find the Weekly Ratings. You'll be able to read the listings of winners in each level and the list of Editor's Choice, too. Again, a great job on your very first entry!
Wonderful "in heart" view of how anger attacks us. I could feel healing taking place here. Good job.