The Official Writing Challenge
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You have a great message in this story. Keep writing!
08/09/07
CORRECT! Anger begets anger--"for we wrestle not against flesh and blood, but against spiritual wickedness...." Thank you for providing the example of how easily this negative energy becomes transferred, and survives from generation to generation.
08/21/07
You did a wonderful job of illustrating your point about anger being passed from one to another. The story leading up to your end point is gripping and kept my attention. Good job!